Some of what you've got here is good, Tim. It's a pass currently, because whilst you have analysed 5 documentaries, you haven't covered a news report which is required from the brief (you need to do three docs/factual programmes and one news).
To get a higher mark for your redraft: - Focus on only four (including one news) - Use the assignment brief to make sure you are discussing everything it asks for... including realism, narrativisation and dramatisation for the three documentaries - Make your examples really detailed, be specific about them
Some of what you've got here is good, Tim. It's a pass currently, because whilst you have analysed 5 documentaries, you haven't covered a news report which is required from the brief (you need to do three docs/factual programmes and one news).
ReplyDeleteTo get a higher mark for your redraft:
- Focus on only four (including one news)
- Use the assignment brief to make sure you are discussing everything it asks for... including realism, narrativisation and dramatisation for the three documentaries
- Make your examples really detailed, be specific about them
Jo