This is still a pass Tim. You, again, haven't covered a news report. You need to read the assignment brief properly.
To get a better mark in your redraft, you need to analyse the issues in a news report too, to proofread it, and to also make sure you have covered EVERY issue that the brief requires (e.g. contract with the viewer).
This is still a pass Tim. You, again, haven't covered a news report. You need to read the assignment brief properly.
ReplyDeleteTo get a better mark in your redraft, you need to analyse the issues in a news report too, to proofread it, and to also make sure you have covered EVERY issue that the brief requires (e.g. contract with the viewer).
Jo